Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Sat, 20 Dec 2008 01:05:46 GMT

I got my laptop back, so I'll be able to keep writing. After I finish the next chapter, I'll put chapter 4 up.

Another thing I've decided to do is to post pictues of the eliminated teams after they are eliminated...not just the South Park characters, but the real people I've based the racers off. I received permission from all involved, of course. ;)

Here are Alex and Krystin:

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Thu, 18 Dec 2008 04:29:17 GMT

Episode Three
Hi-Hi Super Happy Fun Dress Up Pretty Princess Time Go!

Phil: This is Quebec City, Canada, the capital of the province of Quebec and the largest French-speaking city in North America. It is also the second pit stop in a race around the world. Ten teams arrived here. They have no idea where they are heading next.

With their powers of U-Turn and Yield both already gone this early in the race, what tricks, if any, will Erica and Isela use to stay in the...

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Mon, 21 Jul 2008 19:00:55 GMT

If it's possible, could I get your guy's opinions on who you like, who you don't like, who you thinks gonna win, etc? It'd humor me, comparing your thoughts with what I've got written. =)

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 02:08:26 GMT

I'll post them when I'm finished with them all. I hope to have them done by the end of the month summer year, and I finished Leg 4 just a few minutes ago. I'll keep you posted on when I finished things.

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (ghostbusted) — Thu, 10 Jul 2008 21:50:31 GMT

I definitely want to read them but I think you should decide what is best for you as to how and when you post each leg.

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (smileyriley14) — Thu, 10 Jul 2008 21:31:08 GMT

COOL!!! I would like to read them!!

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Wed, 09 Jul 2008 14:08:34 GMT

Just letting you guys know, if anyone's still reading it, that Leg Three is completed...I still have to add pictures, then I'll post it, if you want. Personally, I'd rather wait until I have all the episodes written again (computer got wiped out, had to start all over...only on Leg 4 now.) to post them, so I can post each one a week, but if someone wants them as I finish them, I can do that, too.

Sorry about the wait. I hope I still have some readers,and I hope...

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Sat, 16 Feb 2008 23:49:21 GMT

Ask and you shall receive. Red means the team was eliminated. Blue means the team came in last place on a non-elimination points. < - those things indicate the team that was U-Turned, and a > designates the team that U-Turned them. For Yields, it's the same idea, with brackets. Green indicates the team completing the Fast Forward that leg.

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (smileyriley14) — Sat, 16 Feb 2008 21:50:45 GMT

If you put up a leaderboard that would be better cuz i know is that Justin and Kimber went from 1st to 6th

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Fri, 15 Feb 2008 23:53:56 GMT

Are you guys liking it so far? Who are your favorite teams?

Any predictions?

I likee the feedback. =P

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Thingamajig) — Fri, 15 Feb 2008 19:52:55 GMT

ZOMG, Erica & Isaela are the biggest twist whores ever!

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (florida) — Fri, 15 Feb 2008 18:32:14 GMT

At the beginning of Leg 2, I had a feeling Martha & Lois would be last.

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Tue, 12 Feb 2008 09:28:11 GMT

Corrections from last episode:

1. Teams were given $230.00 for the first leg of the race.

2. The race started at 12 Noon.

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Episode Two: If you Aren't Going to Do Anything, Just Sit there and Look Pretty

This is King's Island, one of the most famous theme...

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Mon, 11 Feb 2008 00:22:36 GMT

Well, it's done. I've just gotta put pictures to text and then I'll post it. Sorry for the wait.

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Sat, 12 Jan 2008 02:46:05 GMT

Episode Two was accidentally erased. I'll have to re-write it, so the next episode will be up ASAP, preferably by the end of the month.

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Thingamajig) — Wed, 09 Jan 2008 23:27:21 GMT

Couple more things...

First, love the South Park caricatures. good way to give some kind of visual representation of the teams. (better than the stick figures I made for my TAR game teams)

Secondly, while the asterisks are good, perhaps consider using an extra space when changing the scene. It took me a while to realise the pigs were the Fast Forward and not the Roadblock. Keep it up *thumbs up*

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Wed, 09 Jan 2008 22:00:15 GMT

Thanks for your review. I'm glad you didn't hate it. =)

I'm really glad you like the challenges. The reason I had the lawyers fuck up so badly was because it was really a way for me to officially kill all hopes of finishing my first TAR fanfic, in which Alex and Krysta win.

Stay tuned!

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Thingamajig) — Wed, 09 Jan 2008 17:56:36 GMT

Meh, it's no Dragoon Fan fic, but at least the tasks were interesting and it'll be updated more than once a month. It should get better once a few teams go out and it's not so confusing. I thought the lawyers leaving the cameras behind was a bit stupid, they could've been injured carrying the beams instead.

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Wed, 09 Jan 2008 14:41:51 GMT

Forgot to put in standings for the last episode:

1st: Kimber and Justin
2nd: Phillip and Katharine
3rd: Zeke and Chauncy
4th: Martha and Lois
5th: Dan and Mary
6th: Shayne and Katie
7th: Sarah and Amber
8th Erica and Isela
9th: Keith and Brittany
10th: Escher and Abbey
11th: Alex and Krysta

Re: Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Wed, 09 Jan 2008 11:41:47 GMT

Episode One: I'd Like to Get Out of the Country as Fast as Possible.

Phil: I'm standing here, at Fountain Square, in Cincinnati, Ohio, the first boom town in America and once the biggest cities in the Midwest. It is here, that a fantastic journey shall begin for eleven teams.

Phil: The teams are being delivered here now in classic automobiles, anticipating the...

Ben's Amazing Race Fanfiction - Leg Three Up!!! (Yes, an update!)

feeds@yuku.com (Ben Tucker) — Wed, 09 Jan 2008 02:54:01 GMT

This season, on the amazing race.

Eleven teams depart for a race around the world. They are:

Martha and Lois, professors and life partners.

Martha: Being on the race is something. I've been a fan since the start of the show, and I never thought I'd be on it.

Lois: This is truly amazing, but I wouldn't want to do it with anyone other than Martha.

Alex and Krysta, attorneys.

Alex; Krysta and I are in an on-again, off-again...