Official OT Poetry Thread

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feeds@yuku.com (managerr) — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 11:52:42 GMT

Haiku is the best
Who the heck cares about rhymes
Don't like it? Just FOAD.

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feeds@yuku.com (Aunor) — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 10:56:30 GMT

Thats the one inspired byt the sorpranos

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feeds@yuku.com (DelosWorld) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 21:58:28 GMT

Stud Muffin
Mud Stuffin
The cat in the hat
The bat in the cat
Brooding gloom
Growing doom.
Juncture.
Tincture.
Fracture.
Bind.

Re: Official OT Poetry Thread

feeds@yuku.com (James) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 21:21:57 GMT

I know right?! Aunor is growing a few thorns now.

Although, I wouldn't mind getting pricked by him at all.... hehe <3

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feeds@yuku.com (Lila Fowler) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 21:16:58 GMT

I liked it too and I usually dislike poems with set rhyme schemes.

Hey, when did Aunor get such a sly sense of humour???

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feeds@yuku.com (JasonSiskaLulz) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 21:13:23 GMT

that was lovely, aunor : ]

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feeds@yuku.com (James) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 21:11:39 GMT

Aunor, you're so sleazy, I don't trust you with even a penny. :P

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feeds@yuku.com (Aunor) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 21:10:31 GMT

No, I don't steal I swindle.

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feeds@yuku.com (Stud Muffin) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 21:04:59 GMT

oh my god, Aunor. there's so spelling errors and grammar mistakes, BUT, it's so awesome.

thank you for sharing. <3

if i send you one of my poems, would you scam it from me and steal it? ;-)

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feeds@yuku.com (Aunor) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 21:03:11 GMT

The border a spherical line, the separation of space and time,

I can see it all with clarity, separation of life and singularity.

"Above the border of this horizon" trapped just above this event horizon.

Nothing shines there is no light, escape velocity greater than light.

No sounds or echoes can be...

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feeds@yuku.com (JasonSiskaLulz) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:45:53 GMT

i miss riliss's poetry thread ;_;

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feeds@yuku.com (Shagnanigans) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:39:15 GMT

kthx scatalogical rhymes go in the Bathroom Guestbook thread.

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feeds@yuku.com (shiza h minelli) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:35:08 GMT

You should post them in Aunor's poety thread then... He made it specifically for that reason.

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feeds@yuku.com (Archimedes) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:34:16 GMT

There once was a man from Nantucket...

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feeds@yuku.com (Riliss) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:33:43 GMT

So what you're saying, Stud Muffin, is that you're either a 13 year old girl or possibly a 17 year old dude?

Because those're the people I'd expect to use a line like that.

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feeds@yuku.com (Stud Muffin) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:30:52 GMT

seriously though. i would love feedback on my work. but i don't want it to link to my RL identity....

i have written a ton of poems...

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feeds@yuku.com (frisbeehead) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:28:35 GMT

roses are red
violets are blue
I fucked your mom
last night in a zoo

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feeds@yuku.com (shiza h minelli) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:28:30 GMT

Just because you say it's official does not necessarily make it so.

Official OT Poetry Thread

feeds@yuku.com (Stud Muffin) — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:26:56 GMT

I'd post some, but since my works appear all across the country in literary journal, I can't post any for anonymity purposes....or maybe I'll change my mind later. :P