I felt like there might be a little bit more content than there typically is in a premiere episode, but in a way, that is more of a good thing.
For the first episode, I didn't really want to focus too much on one tribe, and I tried to even it out a little bit. Whether or not that's
realistic, I tried to give as many people as I could decent development. I even edited out a few things that I deemed less important and almost too much to
add. I'd rather have more content than less, even if it makes the episode a little bit longer, so I was okay with the content I had.
I can't comment on all of these comments, but I'll get to the ones that stick out most.
I must say that you missed out on a great opportunity to give Cao Boi a line about "The Asian going to the yellow tribe," when Jeff asked him which tribe he was going to. I felt like that would be fitting given his racial jokes in Cook Islands.
I can't believe I missed that. I was thinking of a way to incorporate one of his jokes, but I just couldn't think of one that was appropriate and
that was actually funny. This would've been spot-on, and I wish I would've thought of it. I suck at telling jokes anyways, so it makes sense my mind
would miss that. Darn ![]()
I liked the idea of the first Immunity Challenge
Thanks! It would've been a little more understandable on TV, but I hope you got the general idea.
Question: Why does Cao Boi change to Erica? I thought he wanted to vote for Leslie
I didn't really explain it too well, but basically Brook was debating between Erica and Cao Boi at that time. Because Brook was leaning more toward Erica than Leslie, Cao Boi changed his vote to Erica hoping that's who Brook and the rest of the tribe would vote for. Plus, the heated discussion at TC between CaoBoi and Erica.
As you know from your last story, I always said I have a really hard time with this for some reason, so these ratings could be really off. Sorry, if they are
Actually, most were pretty much what I was going for. Good job!
Thanks for reading and replying! I was really happy to see so many people interested, and I'm looking forward to reading all the comments. Have a good
night!














