Hope Episode 6 is coming along well, Kitty! :)

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That looks really good, SFC!
Hope Episode 6 is coming along well, Kitty! :) |
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SFC wrote: Oh WOW. That's AWESOME, SFC. Thank you so much! Yes, I'd love it if you'd update that each round. |
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I'm really sorry this is taking so long. I've been really distracted recently, but I'm working on episode 6 as we speak, and the second it's
done, I'm working on my episode 3 notes so everything is ready to post.
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Okay, just finished episode 6, so I'll be posting episode 3 by the end of the day.
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SOLE SURVIVOR PREDICTIONS:
NEXT BOOT PREDICTIONS:
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r0ry101 wrote:And with your vote, John makes it onto the overall Edgic winners list, and you've pretty much voted the same as the majority, except with John and Kelly swapped. |
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Survivor: Samoa - Episode 3: "Half the tribe are swing votes!" | ||
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Episode 3 Questionaire | ||
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Thank you very much for reading Episode 3 of Survivor: Samoa. Please spend a few minutes to leave some comments and/or predictions for the rest of the story. COMMENTS & QUESTIONS (A) What did you think of this episode? Please be as detailed as you can, wherever possible. (B) What was your overall favorite part of the episode? (C) What would you rate this episode out of 10? (1 being the lowest; 10 being the highest) (D) Do you have any questions about this episode that you'd like to see cleared up in a future episode or for me to answer? 1. SOLE SURVIVOR POLL (A) Which castaway do you think will be the Sole Survivor? 2. WHAT'S NEXT POLL (A) Which castaway will be voted off in Episode 4? (B) Do you have any other predictions for Episode 4? 3. POPULARITY POLL (A) Please rate each castaway's popularity from 1-10. 1 is the lowest score, while 10 is the highest. Please try to base your ratings only on the likability of the characters in my story, not how they appeared on the real show. Ashley - Ben - Betsy - Brett - Dave - Erik - Jaison - John - Kelly - Laura - Liz - Marisa - Mick - Mike - Monica - Natalie - Russell H. - Russell S. - Shambo - Yasmin - 4. EDGIC POLL * For readers familiar with the concept of Edgic. For more information Edgic, please visit this thread: S18 EDGIC
(A) Edgic for gf's fanfics has been very successful over the past few seasons, so I would love to get some reader involvement in determining Edgic ratings. Please submit your own ratings in this thread. Ratings will be compiled and I'll post the final ratings in a chart before the next episode. Rating: INV, UTR, MOR, CP, OTT Tone: NN, N, Mixed (M) , Neutral (), P, PP Visibility: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 Ashley - Ben - Betsy - Dave - Erik - Jaison - John - Kelly - Liz - Marisa - Mick - Monica - Natalie - Russell H. - Russell S. - Shambo - Yasmin - Winner Picks 1. 2. 3. 4.
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Comments & Polls
Thank you very much for reading Episode 3 of Survivor: Samoa. Please spend a few minutes to leave some comments and/or predictions for the rest of the story. COMMENTS & QUESTIONS (A) What did you think of this episode? Please be as detailed as you can, wherever possible. (B) What was your overall favorite part of the episode? Tribal council! Feisty. (C) What would you rate this episode out of 10? (1 being the lowest; 10 being the highest) 10 (D) Do you have any questions about this episode that you'd like to see cleared up in a future episode or for me to answer? 1. SOLE SURVIVOR POLL (A) Which castaway do you think will be the Sole Survivor? ASHLEY 2. WHAT'S NEXT POLL (A) Which castaway will be voted off in Episode 4? SHAMU (B) Do you have any other predictions for Episode 4? 3. POPULARITY POLL (A) Please rate each castaway's popularity from 1-10. 1 is the lowest score, while 10 is the highest. Please try to base your ratings only on the likability of the characters in my story, not how they appeared on the real show. Ashley - 8 Ben - 6 Betsy - 7 Brett - 6 Dave - 2 Erik - 6 Jaison - 10 John - 10 Kelly - 7 Laura - 4 Liz - 7 Marisa - 10 Mick - 4 Mike - 7 Monica - 10 Natalie - 4 Russell H. - 1 Russell S. - 10 Shambo - 1 Yasmin - 7 4. EDGIC POLL * For readers familiar with the concept of Edgic. For more information Edgic, please visit this thread: S18 EDGIC
(A) Edgic for gf's fanfics has been very successful over the past few seasons, so I would love to get some reader involvement in determining Edgic ratings. Please submit your own ratings in this thread. Ratings will be compiled and I'll post the final ratings in a chart before the next episode. Rating: INV, UTR, MOR, CP, OTT Tone: NN, N, Mixed (M) , Neutral (), P, PP Visibility: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 Ashley - MORP3 Ben - CPP3 Betsy - UTRP1 Dave - UTR1 Erik - INV1 Jaison - CP3 John - CP2 Kelly - MORP2 Liz - CP3 Marisa - OTTN5 Mick - UTR1 Monica - OTTP3 Natalie - MOR3 Russell H. - OTTP5 Russell S. - MORP2 Shambo - OTTN3 Yasmin - MOR2 Winner Picks 1. Ashley 2. Jaison 3. John 4. Russell Swan |
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Great twist, I thought Marisa had it made
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EPISODE 3 COMMENTS | ||
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Comments & Polls
Thank you very much for reading Episode 3 of Survivor: Samoa. Please spend a few minutes to leave some comments and/or predictions for the rest of the story. COMMENTS & QUESTIONS (A) What did you think of this episode? Please be as detailed as you can, wherever possible. Excellent episode! I'd say it was better than Episode 2, possibly the best so far but then again I really liked the premiere too. I was surprised to see Marisa go because she had a strong edit in the first two episodes. I agree with your Leslie comparison. (B) What was your overall favorite part of the episode? A few: The scene with Liz and Jaison. I thought you wrote for both of them extremely well, their friendship was logical, and I LOVED Liz's comment about it not being a showmance. Very true to her character. It really does seem like something she'd be concerned about - she's much more focused on the game… John's "it doesn't take a rocket scientist" line. Good scene with him and Monica too. And the fishing scene with Russell and Ben due to the combination of survival and strategy. Of course, Tribal Council was very strong too and you had some great drama there. It's hard to pick a favorite part, really. (C) What would you rate this episode out of 10? (1 being the lowest; 10 being the highest) Let's go with a 9.4. :) (D) Do you have any questions about this episode that you'd like to see cleared up in a future episode or for me to answer? N/A 1. SOLE SURVIVOR POLL (A) Which castaway do you think will be the Sole Survivor? Sticking with John here 2. WHAT'S NEXT POLL (A) Which castaway will be voted off in Episode 4? I can't answer this since I know already; I was trying to think of who I would have guessed but I don't even want to put that (B) Do you have any other predictions for Episode 4? It will be another great episode. :) 3. POPULARITY POLL (A) Please rate each castaway's popularity from 1-10. 1 is the lowest score, while 10 is the highest. Please try to base your ratings only on the likability of the characters in my story, not how they appeared on the real show. Ashley - 8 (I liked her a little more this time) Ben - 10 (I have to root for him) Betsy - 8 (hardly visible, but a very likable person) Brett - 6 (goes down a little bit now that he's gone) Dave - 3 (OTTN and then almost INV, not much to like) Erik - 6 (has a good personality in your story but wasn't shown much) Jaison - 8 (he's doing a good job as leader; I liked his friendship with Liz) John - 9 (one of the better characters so far) Kelly - 6 (just very MORish still) Laura - 2 (OTTN and booted early, so I think she was supposed to be disliked) Liz - 7 (I liked her relationship with Jaison) Marisa - 5 (goes down a little bit this time) Mick - 6 (this is being generous) Mike - 5 (didn't really offer much to begin with, good to have him out early) Monica - 7 (I think she has good potential) Natalie - 7 (pleasant, but low key) Russell H. - 10 (for being a strong character) Russell S. - 9 (pretty similar to how he came across early on in the real show, still very positive) Shambo - 3 (definitely negative and grating in this episode) Yasmin - 4 (I haven't seen much from her yet) 4. EDGIC POLL * For readers familiar with the concept of Edgic. For more information Edgic, please visit this thread: S18 EDGIC
(A) Edgic for gf's fanfics has been very successful over the past few seasons, so I would love to get some reader involvement in determining Edgic ratings. Please submit your own ratings in this thread. Ratings will be compiled and I'll post the final ratings in a chart before the next episode. Rating: INV, UTR, MOR, CP, OTT Tone: NN, N, Mixed (M) , Neutral (), P, PP Visibility: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 Dave - INV1 --- not sure what he's supposed to be Erik - INV1 --- like Dave, I'm not sure what he's supposed to be since he had no confessionals but was mentioned a few times John - CP3 --- a tough call on which one he should be; he definitely had some complexity to his edit once again so I'm going with CP rather than MOR
Kelly - UTR2 --- bordering on MOR2 but UTR2 seems better for her since she didn't have as much development as others ***Surprised to see her at #2 on
your chart
Monica - OTTP4 --- it seemed that her story was all about being the person on the outs who needed to win Immunity and then did; she gets some P for that so
I'm giving her OTTP because the only negativity was from Shambo
Russell S. - MORP2 --- enough visibility to earn a MOR, and he was definitely supposed to be positive Shambo - OTTN3 --- definitely simplified and all negative, including N SPV from Russ Swan
Yasmin - UTR2 --- essentially the same as Kelly, I felt Ashley - MOR3 --- another good episode for her with good development Ben - CPP3 --- for being the pivotal person in switching the vote he didn't get a whole lot but I've decided that there was enough for him to get a
weak CP; also P because we were supposed to be rooting for him and Russell this time
Betsy - UTR2 --- I could see her getting a minor P Jaison - CPP4 --- seemed to give his insights on things and be involved in a lot of different scenes Liz - CP3 --- I could see a P for her just like Jaison but she came across as more neutral due to the focus on the game Marisa - OTTN5 --- not surprisingly, both Marisa and Russell H. were BY FAR the hardest ratings for me. Although I wasn't quite sure when I initially
read the episode, I do see the OTTN for her.
Mick - UTR1 --- by comparison, Erik and Dave should probably be INV1s then Natalie - MOR3 --- another one that was bordering on CP but not quite there, in my opinion. At least you've given her a better edit in the first 3
episodes than the real show!
Russell H. - OTTP5 --- I felt he came off more OTT than CP and the P tone was as opposed to Marisa. Winner Picks 1) John - early confessional talking about self, solid premiere & strong second ep with CPP development (according to my own personal ratings), made fire for tribe, now he gets another CPish episode. If I had to peg anyone as the winner right now it would be him. 2) Ashley - early confessional talking about self & fan status, great premiere & decent second ep in a non-TC episode (she wasn't INV1). She got what she needed in Episode 3, a MORish episode. Some complexity would help her in the next ep or two. 3) Jaison - strong premiere although it may be because he was chief; great second episode too and some solid development in Episode 3 as well.
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Comments & Polls
Thank you very much for reading Episode 3 of Survivor: Samoa. Please spend a few minutes to leave some comments and/or predictions for the rest of the story. COMMENTS & QUESTIONS (A) What did you think of this episode? Please be as detailed as you can, wherever possible. Theres always one person it seems (In both yours and GFF's fics) that do terrible in the real show and here. Sad to see Marisa go, but at least this time she wasnt eliminated because Russell said she was gone and she left. It felt more real this way. BTW was her good edit intentional? Or did it just come out that way? (B) What was your overall favorite part of the episode? Marisa's realization that she's F**ked (C) What would you rate this episode out of 10? (1 being the lowest; 10 being the highest) 9 (D) Do you have any questions about this episode that you'd like to see cleared up in a future episode or for me to answer? Heres the new Voting Sheet 1. SOLE SURVIVOR POLL (A) Which castaway do you think will be the Sole Survivor? Jaison 2. WHAT'S NEXT POLL (A) Which castaway will be voted off in Episode 4? Lets see, you've voted off three survivors with realy big fanbases. So the next one will hopefully follow that trend.... Russell H. or Natalie (B) Do you have any other predictions for Episode 4? A Power Player will be taken out in the switch 3. POPULARITY POLL (A) Please rate each castaway's popularity from 1-10. 1 is the lowest score, while 10 is the highest. Please try to base your ratings only on the likability of the characters in my story, not how they appeared on the real show. Ashley - 6 Ben - 8 Invisibetsy - 3 Brett - 2 Dave - 3 Erik - 5 Jaison - 8 John - 9 Kelly - 9 Laura - 1 Liz - 10 Marisa - 7 Mick - 1 Mike - 2 Monica - 5 Natalie - 3 Russell H. - 5 Russell S. - 8 Shambo - 3 Yasmin - 5 4. EDGIC POLL * For readers familiar with the concept of Edgic. For more information Edgic, please visit this thread: S18 EDGIC
(A) Edgic for gf's fanfics has been very successful over the past few seasons, so I would love to get some reader involvement in determining Edgic ratings. Please submit your own ratings in this thread. Ratings will be compiled and I'll post the final ratings in a chart before the next episode. Rating: INV, UTR, MOR, CP, OTT Tone: NN, N, Mixed (M) , Neutral (), P, PP Visibility: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 Ashley - MORP Ben - CPP Betsy - UTR Dave - INV Erik - INV Jaison - CP John - CP Kelly - MORP Liz - CP Marisa - OTTM (Didnt know who to root for, so I gave them both M) Mick - UTR Monica - OTTP Natalie - MOR Russell H. - OTTM Russell S. - MORP Shambo - OTTN Yasmin - UTR Winner Picks 1. Jaison 2. Swan 3. Ashley 4. Kelly |
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chapera rocks wrote:I wouldn't say Ashley was P, perse. She did have that scene where Russell called her and Marisa lazy. And Russell wasn't completely P either, because he got kinda negative at tribal council, so I think an M is better for him. |
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survivormarc14 wrote:Yeah, given Russell being on her tribe, I just never saw Marisa as lasting long in the game. |
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guatemala fanfic wrote:I like your winner picks. Thanks for responding! |
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SFC wrote:Nothing much tosay except that I'm surprised at some of the MORPs for Kelly. I see it now, but I was definitely on the fence in terms of her tone this episode. |
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This is a great read, Kitty! I've enjoyed each of your episodes.
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