I appreciate you reading it, I know you didn't mean to be offensive, I know you're trying to give me constructive critisism, but I actually kind of did take a lot of it just a tiny bit offensivelly, I am totally taking this episode seriously, it's not supposed to be a parody, I don't know why people keep saying that it is. I think I put a lot of thought into every episode. And just because you think the characters should act one way doesn't mean I got them totally wrong. Once again thank you for reading it, but I don't think I'm going to change it too much because right now, I like it the way it is. But I suppose I could make it a bit less over the top, after reading it again, I can see what you're talking about. Thanks again!
I'm sorry. That was not my intention, but I hope that it makes you strive to do even better! :)