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Survivor Solomon Islands - FanFic - Tribes on Pg. 2 |
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Last Edited By: Shalomo 01/29/09 6:29 PM.
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FranklinBluth |
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The Katie vs. Twila arguments will be golden. Katie and Corinne may get along very well or I guess they could hate each other too. Burton should kick ass with
this cast. A Burton, Jean-Robert, Katie alliance would be so great. Make it so.
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GabrielP |
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WHERE'S KELLY??????? :/
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Vyvvi |
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Shalomo wrote: You obviousl don't know what this sites foundtion is built on...but this cast is kind of boring, if you included Ramone from Survivor: Calcutta that'll change everything, you should check out futurecontestnat's fanfic to see how well Ramone effects a fanfic. |
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Shalomo |
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Any hopes for potential tribes?
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Shalomo |
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I'm bumping.
Anyone else have any comments? |
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GabrielP |
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Nope
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Quiddity |
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Rule 1 about LTS Fanfics:
You will never be able to top nat, so don't even bother. He is so much better a writer than you, I know that before you even begin. Rule 2 about LTS Fanfics: Beware of BobBob coming in and stealing the show by promoting his simvivor thing. Rule 3 about LTS Fanfics: Any fanfic without Ramone, Liddy and Collen is immediate fail. |
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Shalomo |
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Is Nat the one that was on Survivor Gabon?
He's my idol. |
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taigark |
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I wonder why I hate over half the cast.
But it should make for an interesting read.
Last Edited By: taigark
12/21/08 9:19 AM.
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WTFscissoring8 |
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Shalomo wrote: so basically, black guys vs. bitchy girls? |
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Shalomo |
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Yes there are 4 blacks guys and a lot of bitches. That's just how the casting played out.
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Vyvvi |
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Quiddity wrote: Nobody has ever stated a more accurate statement in the history of sucks. |
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O2JamFreak |
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Quiddity wrote:
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Shalomo |
Opening Scene | ||
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Yeah, this is my opening scene. It's my first fanfic thing ever really, so it's not the best. Constructive criticism is appreciated, asshat remarks
will be read.
Survivor Solomon Islands Episode 1 - The War Begins We fade into a beautiful overhead camera shot of beautiful islands. Jeff (NARRATION): These are the Solomon Islands. Even with such a tropical tranquility, these islands have a tumultuous past. Rugged jungle is now seen. Two snakes fight. Jeff (NARRATION): Some of the most intense fighting of World War II took place here. Intense waves are seen hitting the beach. Jeff (NARRATION): And in 2007 these scenic islands were struck by not only an earthquake, but a tsunami. Various nature shots are seen, all beautiful. Jeff (NARRATION): But the country has moved on, and it's still one of the most beautiful places on earth. With active volcanoes, exotic wildlife, and a rich tribal culture, the Solomon Islands are always holding an unexpected surprise. The camera shoots down to the water, and we see Jeff Probst standing on the top deck of a yacht. Various shots of the Islands are shown as he speaks. Jeff: Our survivor's adventure will play out in this beautiful backdrop. 16 people, from all different walks of life, will be forced to work together in order to create a new society, while battling the elements and each other. They must learn to adapt, or they'll be voted out. Only one will remain to claim the million dollar prize. (Pause) 39 days, 16 people, one survivor! The camera quickly zooms out to see a wide shot of the gorgeous Solomon Islands. THEME SONG IS HERE |
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We are back on the yacht. Jeff walks around the back deck.
Jeff: This season of Survivor, the cast isn't your ordinary group of new people. It's a group of people who've already played this tough game. Here they come. Hey looks out to the open sea. We can see a large war canoe approaching. It's filled with people, and being rowed by natives. At the canoe we can clearly see the people. As Jeff introduces them, we see their faces. Jeff: Gervase from Survivor Borneo, Mike from Survivor Australia, Kim from Survivor Africa, Sean from Survivor Marquesas, Ted from Survivor Thailand, Heidi from Survivor Amazon, Burton from Survivor Pearl Islands, Twila from Survivor Vanuatu, Cindy from Survivor Guatemala, Bruce from Survivor Panama, Becky from Survivor Cook Islands, Dreamz from Survivor Fiji, Jean-Robert from Survivor China, Natalie from Survivor Micronesia, and Corinne from Survivor Gabon. The boat is getting much closer to Jeff's yacht. Jeff: Some of their reputations might hurt them, some might help. But for all of them, it's a second chance at the one million dollar prize. The boat is finally to the yacht. Jeff: Hey guys, how was the ride over here? Sean: Not as good as yours. Everyone laughs. Jeff: Let me tell you, none of you will be spending time on this yacht. Everyone seems somewhat upset. Twila (Confessional): Some people were real upset cause they couldn't get on. . I didn't care cause that's the closest to a yacht I'm ever gonna be. Jeff: If you haven't figured it out yet, you all are getting a second chance at playing this game. That game starts right now. There are two canoes attached to this boat. One purple, one blue. The canoes are shown attached. Jeff: Right now, I'm going to divide you into two tribes. We figured since we're bringing back old players, we'd bring back old tribe names. The purple tribe will be Malakal. Rotu will be the blue tribe. Mike (Confessional): I'm really excited to be out here a second time. Obviously I didn't make it as far I would have liked in the Outback. Corinne (Confessional): I hope to god I'm not on a tribe with a bunch of idiots. I want to play a real game with real people. These people, they have potential. Jeff: Let's go. He pulls out two baskets off buffs. He pulls out a purple Malakal buff. Jeff: Heidi, first member of Malakal. Purple canoe. Jeff tosses her a buff. She swings the buff around playfully. Once a player's name is called they get out of the war boat, the walk across the yacht's deck onto their respective tribe canoe. Mike: Can I be on her tribe Jeff? Everyone laughs. Jeff: Back to business. First member of Rotu is Cindy. Cindy seems happy. Jeff throws her a buff. Cindy (confessional): I'm glad I'm not on Heidi's tribe. She's the pose for playboy type. That's not my interest. Jeff: Burton, next member of Malakal. Burton catches his Buff. Jeff: The next member of Rotu is Gervase. Jeff gets Gervase's buff and tosses it to him. He grabs a Malakal buff. Jeff: Here you go Katie; you're a part of Malakal. She receives her buff and gets in the Malakal boat with Burton and Heidi. Katie: Nice meet you. Jeff: Ted, you're going to Rotu. Ted puts the blue on his bald head. Jeff: The next member of Malakal is Twila. Jean-Robert, you're going to Rotu. Twila gets in the purple canoe; Jean-Robert gets in the blue canoe. Jeff: Corinne and Sean, you are members of Malakal. Jeff hands gives them theirs buffs, and Sean helps Corinne onto the canoe. Jeff: Rotu's two newest members are Natalie and Dreamz. Jeff tosses them their buffs and pulls out a purple one. He tosses it to Mike. Jeff: Mike, you're on Malakal. And Becky, you're on Rotu. Mike gets in his boat. Becky gets her buff and makes her way to the blue canoe. Jeff: Kim, and Bruce. The oldest male and oldest female. A blue buff i s pulled out by Jeff. Jeff: This one goes to Kim. She smiles and joins her boat. Kim (confessional): This is a really great group of people. I'm very excited to play a second time. Hopefully my second time I'll get first. Jeff: Bruce, I think you know what this means. Jeff tosses him a Malakal buff. Bruce: I'm happy with that Jeff. Jeff: These are the tribes you'll be living with. In each of your canoes is a map to your respective islands. There waiting for you will be basic supplies, just enough to get by. These islands look like paradise, but these 39 days won't be easy. I'll see you at your first immunity challenge. Mike: Rotu, row! The tribes unhook their boats and push away from the yacht. They begin to row away. The camera zooms out to see Rotu and Malakal going different directions. |
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Shalomo |
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Has anyone read this?
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guatemala fanfic |
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I liked it so far, Shalomo, but I really think your best bet is to write one complete episode first and post it at the
same time. You're trying to get people's attention to read and I don't think a lot of people will want to keep coming back to read fragmented parts
of your episode. So finish the premiere, then put it in the thread title when it's up so people know. Hope that helps.
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YemaGrl1988 |
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I read it. I don't like the names you chose for the tribes though.
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Lemun |
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I think you actually chose an interesting cast. If you can stay true to their personalities, I think it would make for a good read. I agree with the others,
though. Do a full episode and then post it. I'll read.
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Shalomo |
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Does anyone have an opinion on using old tribe names? Cause I can go back and change them.
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