I'd post some, but since my works appear all across the country in literary journal, I can't post any for anonymity purposes....or maybe I'll
change my mind later. :P
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Posts: 1190 (10/26/09 06:26 PM) |
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shiza h minelli |
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Posts: 2607 (10/26/09 06:28 PM) |
Just because you say it's official does not necessarily make it so.
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Posts: 17277 (10/26/09 06:28 PM) Make it a funny one! |
roses are red
violets are blue I fucked your mom last night in a zoo |
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Posts: 1191 (10/26/09 06:30 PM) |
seriously though. i would love feedback on my work. but i don't want it to link to my RL identity....
i have written a ton of poems... |
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Posts: 5828 (10/26/09 06:33 PM) Ugly on the inside |
So what you're saying, Stud Muffin, is that you're either a 13 year old girl or possibly a 17 year old dude?
Because those're the people I'd expect to use a line like that. |
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Archimedes |
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Posts: 1086 (10/26/09 06:34 PM) Divides by zero |
There once was a man from Nantucket...
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shiza h minelli |
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Posts: 2609 (10/26/09 06:35 PM) |
You should post them in Aunor's poety thread then... He made it specifically for that reason.
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Posts: 5759 (10/26/09 06:39 PM) I'm not drunk
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kthx scatalogical rhymes go in the Bathroom Guestbook thread.
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Posts: 3825 (10/26/09 06:45 PM) What is a muffin top? |
i miss riliss's poetry thread ;_;
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Aunor |
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Posts: 1961 (10/26/09 09:03 PM) I torture animals
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The border a spherical line, the separation of space and time,
I can see it all with clarity, separation of life and singularity.
"Above the border of this horizon" trapped just above this event horizon.
Nothing shines there is no light, escape velocity greater than light.
No sounds or echoes can be heard, no cries of pain, no spoken word.
I stand here frozen in place, staring at this tear in space.
I see a woman's eyes with kohl, the Egyptians believed in a seventh soul.
I can see it all with clarity, separation of love the singularity.
One by one my souls touch the horizon and tumble past the event horizon.
Kha, the body, atoms of my flesh, first to fall to cosmic test.
Ba, the soul of breath, second to fall to the stillness of death.
Khabs, the shade, my spirit side, rips away and falls inside.
Akhu, intellect, thought and reason, a death colder then winter's season.
Seb, ancestral soul, it is my past, lingers longer yet fails to last.
Putah, father to Akhu, he is wisdom, falls into the darkened kingdom.
I see a woman's eyes with kohl, as I am left with my final soul.
This woman's love is like a sun, I have found a love, an imortal one.
Atmu, divine, my eternal soul. The woman's love makes me whole.
She and I escape the black hole cavity, breaking the
chains of deadly gravity.
Moving back from the dark horizon, looking beyond the event horizon.
We are moving forward free of mortality, escaping to a new reality.
Our trajectory is set, no words need be spoken; the spell of singularity finally broken |
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Stud Muffin |
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Posts: 1193 (10/26/09 09:04 PM) |
oh my god, Aunor. there's so spelling errors and grammar mistakes, BUT, it's so awesome.
thank you for sharing. <3 if i send you one of my poems, would you scam it from me and steal it? ;-) |
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Aunor |
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Posts: 1962 (10/26/09 09:10 PM) I torture animals
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No, I don't steal I swindle.
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James |
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Posts: 532 (10/26/09 09:11 PM) |
Aunor, you're so sleazy, I don't trust you with even a penny. :P
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JasonSiskaLulz |
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Posts: 3831 (10/26/09 09:13 PM) What is a muffin top? |
that was lovely, aunor : ]
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Lila Fowler |
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Posts: 4555 (10/26/09 09:16 PM) |
I liked it too and I usually dislike poems with set rhyme schemes. Hey, when did Aunor get such a sly sense of humour??? |
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James |
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Posts: 533 (10/26/09 09:21 PM) |
I know right?! Aunor is growing a few thorns now.
Although, I wouldn't mind getting pricked by him at all.... hehe <3 |
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DelosWorld |
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Posts: 1862 (10/26/09 09:58 PM) |
Stud Muffin
Mud Stuffin The cat in the hat The bat in the cat Brooding gloom Growing doom. Juncture. Tincture. Fracture. Bind. |
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Aunor |
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Posts: 1963 (10/27/09 10:56 AM) I torture animals
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Thats the one inspired byt the sorpranos
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managerr |
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Posts: 16033 (10/27/09 11:52 AM) Registered user |
Haiku is the best
Who the heck cares about rhymes Don't like it? Just FOAD. |
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